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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 18:38 GMT | #605655 |   | Split
I'll find it, don't you worry

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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 18:40 GMT | #605661 |   | Split
Just warning you now that its hidden away in a metaphor


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 18:48 GMT | #605684 |   | Split
That's cheating! I suppose you make up the rules, though

Well in that case... *BING* (idea)
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2. Starlight pt1

I made my way towards the tube station. The tube would take me from the habitation complex straight to the central district which housed the headquarters of the various companies and their agencies – including that of my own employer: the Cydonia Excavation Cooperative.




"Far away, this ship is taking me far away..."


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 18:50 GMT | #605689 |   | Split
Thats one of the links yeah, but think of it in terms of how it relates to Old Town


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 19:06 GMT | #605732 |   | Split
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2. Starlight pt1

It was written into my contract that I had to make an effort to escort these people back to their homes ...

“Ok, guys, it looks like I’ve got to take you lot back to Old Town, you know the rules, get on the train,” they did as they were told and soon we were rushing through the tube to the oldest part of the city.

The journey was very short, and in less than a minute we were stepping out of the carriage into Old Town Station.





Any of these? Same quote, but from the perspective of the residents of Old Town


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 19:14 GMT | #605751 |   | Split
you won't find any direct quotes - its more to do with the ideas, think about the people who are in Old Town - why they're there, what it would have been like for them - pay attention to what the Old Town's newest resident says - thats a big clue - you are dealing with the right verse though.

Another link is to do with why the Old Towners were in New Town - there's a reference to Old Town's sky which might help you.


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 19:22 GMT | #605759 |   | Split
Gotcha

The new guy is far away from his family (the people who care if he lives or dies), and that could also apply to the 'I just want to hold you in my arms' bit...

Edit: another link? Too subtle!!! *smacks with wet fish*


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 19:30 GMT | #605770 |   | Split
Yep, thats pretty much that idea summed up - people who are condemned to live in New Town are separated from their families.

Yes there's another link *slaps with suitable metaphor* - its to do with starlight and what it serves as a metaphor for and why the Old Towners make the journey into New Town every night, despite the fact they're breaking the law, risking arrest, etc.


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 19:46 GMT | #605780 |   | Split
WOW Since when was our rank 'Discovery Making Chemist'???

As for the other link - any chance of just... telling me?


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 20:09 GMT | #605862 |   | Split
:O I'm a PHYSICIST!!!!!! I DO PWOPER SCIENCE!!!!

but I do like the new badges

ok, "starlight" represents money, love, family - things people need and think they need. In Old Town the sky is a blanket of smog - there is no starlight - just like there's no family, love or money.

The Old Towners go to New Town to make money, see their loved ones, etc - in their own way they're "chasing a starlight"

Other ideas from all the songs will crop now and again as the story continues making some ideas clearer and introducing new ones so don't worry if you don't see the link straight away.


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 20:17 GMT | #605891 |   | Split
Well, at least we get to make discoveries. Bagsy discovering the ability of time-travel

By ze way, did you think about all these links beforehand, or did you just include some of them as the opportunity arrose? And when can I expect the next part??? (Most Pressing Issue)


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 20:19 GMT | #605897 |   | Split
Some are opportunistic, others are planned but some are something that starts as being rather simple growing into something really significant - I foresee Old Town will have a huge part to play


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 20:23 GMT | #605907 |   | Split
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I foresee Old Town will have a huge part to play



Oooo getting all prophetic on me
(....next part?...)


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 20:31 GMT | #605925 |   | Split
ok next part, I've finished the first paragraph, and no you can't have a preview The more thought I put into this chapter the longer it potentially gets - I need to fit a lot in and get him out of the blackhole and into a state suitable for Soldier's Poem (which I already have big plans for, lets just say that soon everything is going to change - something big is gonna happen ;) )

hopefully I'll have Motp1 up by the early morning, but I've said that before - soon though


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 21:03 GMT | #605960 |   | Split
I demand a teaser!! Just a line? A snippet? One sentence?

Could you say no to this face?


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Report this post | 17 Jan 2007 21:41 GMT | #606036 |   | Split
I'd rather wallow in the agony of suspense. (spot link to Showbiz there, ahem)


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Report this post | 18 Jan 2007 19:57 GMT | #607208 |   | Split
wow the links really are subtle, i didnt guess the second one! they are really cool though, fun to try and find
and its past morning now, have you finished MotP1 yet? if not i agree with Daniella, we want a snippet!!
ok ill stop being annoying now.


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Report this post | 18 Jan 2007 22:21 GMT | #607464 |   | Split
well I agree with unintended musette - wallow in supsense!
however I will tell you that for this chapter I'm going to be exploring the imagery the music conjures up - rather than simply referencing the lyrics


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Report this post | 18 Jan 2007 22:44 GMT | #607482 |   | Split
But I'm already wallowing
When do you think this chapter will be ready?


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Report this post | 18 Jan 2007 22:48 GMT | #607488 |   | Split
well I just got the second paragraph done... I haven't really had chance to sit down and have a proper go at it yet, I guess I'm about a fifth of the way through the amount I want to do before I post it, I promise I will get it done soon, in fact i want to get a fair bit done since I won't have time to do any at all over the weekend


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Report this post | 18 Jan 2007 22:51 GMT | #607492 |   | Split
Why watcha doing?


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Report this post | 18 Jan 2007 22:55 GMT | #607495 |   | Split
my girlfriend hopefully (she's coming up the weekend ) but that means I won't have time to do "me-stuff" like writing my stories and whatnot - in all fairness is a tradeoff I can live with for three or four days


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Report this post | 18 Jan 2007 22:58 GMT | #607499 |   | Split
Haha, Ok then fair enough
I suppose I can handle a weekend without if I must


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Report this post | 18 Jan 2007 23:10 GMT | #607508 |   | Split
I'll keep adding the odd paragraph to what I've got whenever I get chance if I can (i.e. when she's asleep ) but I'm at the stage now where I'm worried about it losing steam, even though I know whats coming next and that potentially it'll be good I'm worried about it all going wrong for whatever reason.


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Report this post | 18 Jan 2007 23:11 GMT | #607510 |   | Split
I have faith It'll be good
*crosses fingers just in case*

I'm off to bed now, school and all that. Byeeeeeee xxXXxx


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