What do you personally think this means? It is a little quiz of your reading comprehension as much as it is of my poetical tinkerings. Thanks. Without further ado, I present you:

Sacrifice - by a person who is very bored

Did you know that I died for you
Last Friday morning
love cried out for you
And now I'm standing at your door
A ghost
Just the rain, just the sun, it's just the snow
or the mist
"Honey, come back in again."
And shut that door
I bled to death while you drank the wine
Too bad you didn't celebrate in time
You stood up, looked, and for a second
saw me
An angel
On your shoulders, running for yourself
Funny how they always want to know all about you
And I spilled
Blue is the sky as I fly into the light
A fable
who will never become a legend
You thought you heard me in the night
A spirit
Suddenly you're in the hospital
If only cars could fly like birds do
People would stop fowling
And you would understand

I am in Iceland for the year!

I LOOOOOOVE THAT!!!

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oooooooooooooooh. thats really good!! well done!! i likey it.

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Ilse..

THIS IS THE EXACT REASON WE NEED AN "Art And Literacy Section."

Why is this in Unmoderated, i'll never know. We need a new section.

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yeah i think ure right there....we need that section. come on...if even the losers in the official board have it..how cant we surely?!

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Ilse..

nice piece there!! i write songs when im bored as well

wow, I really like that

Thanks and all but what do you guys think it all means?

I am in Iceland for the year!

i think its means; boyfriend and girlfriend story, the girl is playing away from home and while she is playing away, he dies in an accident on the way 2 buy her an engagment ring or sumthin and afterwards in her consious (which is guilty) she hearing her boyfriend speak to her

Wow, this is truly amazing!!!!

We stop in every passing place
To watch the world move faster than we do

Yr wrong. These are the lost riots.

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HyperMusic

It's beautiful!I've written a helluva lot songs about the same thing.

You have tamed me, now you must take me.
How am I supposed to be?
I do not have my thorns.

funky............thats all i can say.

its great! well done!

Last.fm

*cheers*

its very very very good

and when we go we hurt someone
in love we come in hate we go
there are only thoughts to remember those

the lover kills and we say goodbye

who thought im not twisted?

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